Introducing
Script Apart Script Coverage!
Get comprehensive, fast-turnaround feedback on the latest draft of your screenplay from Script Apart host Al Horner
Finished a new draft of your next feature film or TV pilot and wondering what next? We’ve got your back! Join the countless aspiring writers and working professionals who’ve elevated their scripts based on detailed notes from professional writer and script consultant Al Horner.
With five day turnaround, it’s a fast and effective way to level up your script. Scroll down for what to expect…
Here’s what’s included…
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An overview of the film and its premise, feeding back on how well your log line sells that premise to prospective film industry professionals
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Are your characters captivating? Here, Al answers that question and offers suggestions if needed on how to make them stand out further
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A detailed breakdown of where your screenplay is currently firing on all cylinders, with page-by-page references to the scenes, themes and granular moments that impress
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If there are any plot holes, character inconsistencies or elements that could perhaps be improved upon, this is where Al will flag – with gentle suggestions as to how about go about fixing them
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Whatever the genre, you want your script to make people feel something. In this section of your notes, Al assesses the emotional punch of your script and how you might take that emotion up a notch
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Your feedback ends with a final review and five ideas to action that can make your next draft one that wows
Interested?
Hit the icon below or email thescriptapartpodcast@gmail.com to get in touch for a quote. Flexible prices available for writers from low-income and underrepresented communities.